Kindergartener-This is a small furry little animal that is know as the long eared Jerboa. It has big ears so it can hear if there are any predators around trying to kill it for dinner. So if you look at this animal it is pretty strange.Republican-This animal is known as the long eared Jeboa it has distinctive features that stand out from other animals that you would normally see. Some of the features include its long ears, long wiskers and its small pig like nose. Most of the features help this creature survive in the wild such as its long ears to help it hear better so it'll know if there is a predator stocking this animal. So how did this animal get to our planet no one knows except the animal itself.
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Let start by saying lol big ears! Anyway I think you did a very good job of tailoring the complexity of the post for each of your audiences. The kindergarten one was nice and simple and Republican one was appropriately more complex. However there are some issues such as the fact that the title is mislabeled. There should be a "#1" in front of the post title. It’s not a big deal now since you only have one post. However later on it will become important as you post more often. Then as for the Republican section you should add something that makes it clearer that Republicans are your target audience. At the moment your audience could really be any group who is smarter than Kindergartners. Just a simple introduction or even a couple pro/anti Republican jokes would be all that's needed. The same could be said for the Kindergartners section but because Kindergartners is a less clearly defined group as far as interests and value systems it’s not as big a deal. Overall just fix that title and try to appeal more to your audience’s specific interests. Other than that, very well done.
I enjoy things with big ears. Always have. Nice picture. I enjoy it, as it has big ears. Perchance, do people make clothing out of this animal? I'd kill for ear-gloves; not gloves for my ears, rather gloves with ear on the glove. Remember, you can't spell glove with out love!
Poo, this has got to be at least moar longer. To be totally honest, you're article wasn't patriotic enough. That's a bad thing. Behold your group's other blogs. Somedude's blog is as American as Uncle Sam making an apple pie with Freedom flavored frosting and pie crust made out of misprinted copies of the Declaration of Independence. I don't mean to blow my own horn, but at least I'm not an American-netural (=America Hater) like you. In fact, I'm about as American as an Eagle takin' a dump on Stalin's statue in the Red Square.
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